Reducing the length of the working week has many advantages, especially in terms of a better work-life balance. While it is economically difficult to do this.
The use of iPods has increased considerably. However, the number of CDs purchased either online or on the high street has decreased.
A few companies attempt to achieve a balance between the environment and business. Whilst most of the companies aim for pure profit.
A considerable amout of towns in Europe have been pedestrianised in contrast with very few towns in North America have been.
There are number of arguments for abolishing the death penalty conversely to the few supporters.
Monday, 7 July 2008
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Reducing the length of the working week has many advantages, especially in terms of a better work-life balance. While it is economically difficult to do this [IF YOU USE THIS PHRASE, THE SENTENCE HAS TO HAVE TWO CLAUSES].
The use of iPods has increased considerably. However, the number of CDs purchased either online or on the high street has decreased.
A few companies attempt to achieve a balance between the environment and business. Whilst most of the companies aim for pure profit [SEE ABOVE COMMENTS].
A considerable amout of towns in Europe have been pedestrianised in contrast with very few towns in North America [YOU DON'T NEED THESE WORDS: have been.]
There are number of arguments for abolishing the death penalty conversely to the few supporters [CONVERSELY IS ALWAYS FOLLOWED BY A SUBJECT + VERB + OBJECT SENTENCE].
Thanks very much Steve for your kind suggestions, would be great help.
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